He found her outside, pegging pants like he counted clients. He longed to sell himself to her.
She curled her toes into the grass and watched clouds scudding to the finish.
How much did you get done today?
Enough, and she stretched to pin up his smalls. Success for her was sunshine hours.
The door banged shut.
This is my writing in response to the prompt here. It is about those days in relationships when it feels like you are just speaking different languages.
Anyone is welcome to link up to the writing prompt to flex your creative muscles and get some eyes on your work.
For 60 words – excellent. I had to do a 100 word story and that was hard, but 60 words? Well done Kim. @JackWolfeWriter
Thankyou. That’s such nice feedback! ☺
A very quick read – and thought provoking. Well done, I liked it.
I like your header! And the picture that goes with this short story is as beautiful!
Thank you!
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Love it! Great piece
Thanks very much Renee!